tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post3879941410996455801..comments2024-01-12T00:48:48.031-06:00Comments on Go Teen Writers: Showing vs. TellingStephanie Morrillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-34431388532033260802014-01-16T21:26:01.874-06:002014-01-16T21:26:01.874-06:00Same problem with my "Every word he spoke was...Same problem with my "Every word he spoke was a lie". Thanks for the tip.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-14649218670705667252014-01-16T14:44:29.848-06:002014-01-16T14:44:29.848-06:00Thanks for the tips and for your feedback on my &q...Thanks for the tips and for your feedback on my "Every word he spoke was a lie" entry!<br /><br />Even though I know that "telling not showing" is the wrong way to write, your feedback helped me to realize that my "writing eyes" aren't "fine-tuned" enough to really be able to see when this was happening in my writing. So as well as your feedback, I got an exercise in trying to find the place(s) where I'd made that mistake as well as the place(s) where my meaning was unclear. <br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />Hannah Bartahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16113296657540921039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-78822718402363423452010-06-03T17:20:59.753-05:002010-06-03T17:20:59.753-05:00Agreed. I'd better check over my writing!:)Agreed. I'd better check over my writing!:)emiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02042164350910286833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-5866233563690676062010-06-03T15:09:35.879-05:002010-06-03T15:09:35.879-05:00Happy to help! I'm constantly finding those ki...Happy to help! I'm constantly finding those kinds of paragraphs in my first drafts. I think it's because a lot of times in the first draft, I'm still figuring out the story.Stephanie Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-29223630646245150222010-06-03T15:06:20.846-05:002010-06-03T15:06:20.846-05:00Nice tip! I looked back at my manuscript and notic...Nice tip! I looked back at my manuscript and noticed that I had one of those long paragraph-things in it. I was able to cut it out in time :) Thanks!!Karen Twomblyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00055608626935002977noreply@blogger.com