tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post855084126435566172..comments2024-01-12T00:48:48.031-06:00Comments on Go Teen Writers: One of the top five entries from the Go Teen Writers 1,000 word contestStephanie Morrillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-82048910985347200802014-04-30T19:26:31.060-05:002014-04-30T19:26:31.060-05:00I love the sentence, "The mushroom of red blo...I love the sentence, "The mushroom of red blossomed below." Very nice job, Deborah! Your writing is descriptive but not overdone and your voice sounds very natural and comfortable. <br /><br />Congratulations!<br /><br />-The Russian PianistThe Russian Pianistnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-17320008099980592982014-04-25T09:19:29.912-05:002014-04-25T09:19:29.912-05:00Cool. Like everyone else said, very original. You ...Cool. Like everyone else said, very original. You have me worried about the turtle and curious as to what's going on with the sister. Definitely would like to read more :)<br /><br />Congrats!Amanda Fischernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-27650473274102425112014-04-25T04:06:08.206-05:002014-04-25T04:06:08.206-05:00Haven`t read anything like this before, good job! ...Haven`t read anything like this before, good job! The descriptives were great.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15317792300616098592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-26820390514739115502014-04-24T23:51:46.581-05:002014-04-24T23:51:46.581-05:00I LOVED it! Great job, Deborah!I LOVED it! Great job, Deborah!Sofia Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03703884443937255154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-20354400388537371542014-04-24T22:13:35.488-05:002014-04-24T22:13:35.488-05:00Wow--very original. I've never read any story ...Wow--very original. I've never read any story about/including an MC interested in protecting turtles :)<br /><br /><a href="simply-hannah-elise.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">walking in the air.</a>Hannah Bartahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16113296657540921039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-83062208390819611462014-04-24T18:56:17.542-05:002014-04-24T18:56:17.542-05:00Nice! I want to read this :)Nice! I want to read this :)Mayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17972131616496707679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-75806670613187423142014-04-24T15:41:28.728-05:002014-04-24T15:41:28.728-05:00I really really like this! Especially these lines:...I really really like this! Especially these lines: 'My mouth filled with the taste of saltwater and blood. In the murk under the surface, I felt rather than saw the barnacled shell of a turtle, wide as a steering wheel and slick with algae.' Sooo good :) Keep writing this story! It's great!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14162486665066635635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-47718738239934643872014-04-24T14:13:16.982-05:002014-04-24T14:13:16.982-05:00Great job!!! Sound's very intriguing!Great job!!! Sound's very intriguing! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14085284182613901276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-58881576001993786112014-04-24T12:08:01.319-05:002014-04-24T12:08:01.319-05:00Nice! I like this one. I could picture it very cle...Nice! I like this one. I could picture it very clearly. :)Aidyl Ewohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18193031689876630475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-60793577772088265272014-04-24T09:28:13.387-05:002014-04-24T09:28:13.387-05:00Great job, Deborah! I'm definitely curious abo...Great job, Deborah! I'm definitely curious about this story! Whitneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-11799359832866257412014-04-24T07:39:11.934-05:002014-04-24T07:39:11.934-05:00I really liked the MC. I don't usually like th...I really liked the MC. I don't usually like that kind of story because they always use a whale or a dolphin, but it was great!Robin Hoodnoreply@blogger.com