tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post933208129738345045..comments2024-01-12T00:48:48.031-06:00Comments on Go Teen Writers: William Strunk Jr. on Adjectives and NounsStephanie Morrillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-52059510145782853302014-08-06T12:52:18.185-05:002014-08-06T12:52:18.185-05:00Haha, apparently. :D
Thank you! :)Haha, apparently. :D<br /><br />Thank you! :)Catsi Eceerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08332529011525703394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-57659590127366606682014-08-06T12:51:52.261-05:002014-08-06T12:51:52.261-05:00Oh, I like that! I have to go google wingback chai...Oh, I like that! I have to go google wingback chairs now, so I can get a good picture of what they are. ;)Catsi Eceerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08332529011525703394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-19137286677023814142014-08-05T21:50:00.630-05:002014-08-05T21:50:00.630-05:00What's funny is that when I was going through ...What's funny is that when I was going through my edits to share one of my own, I almost shared a verb. It's easier to be snazzy with those, I guess.<br /><br />You picked great details. I like this a lot :)Stephanie Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-53710814139485871122014-08-05T21:49:15.534-05:002014-08-05T21:49:15.534-05:00Nice!
And, yes, plots are good :)Nice!<br /><br />And, yes, plots are good :)Stephanie Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-35031595551587742082014-08-05T20:31:33.003-05:002014-08-05T20:31:33.003-05:00Cool! I can picture that. :D (She's wearing a ...Cool! I can picture that. :D (She's wearing a large-brimmed sunhat too, in my picture. ;) )Catsi Eceerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08332529011525703394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-44467802804136092702014-08-05T20:30:14.675-05:002014-08-05T20:30:14.675-05:00I'm bad with nouns.... Meh. I'm much bette...I'm bad with nouns.... Meh. I'm much better with verbs, LOL.<br /><br />But anyway, here's something that I found:<br />My fingers wrapped around the top of the wall, rough brick scraping away a layer of skin and cracking my fingernails.<br />I'm not sure the individual nouns are too fantastic, but I like how the sentence goes. ;)Catsi Eceerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08332529011525703394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-24080917373533327032014-08-05T20:17:29.920-05:002014-08-05T20:17:29.920-05:00Ooh, I can totally picture that.
Here, from my cra...Ooh, I can totally picture that.<br />Here, from my crazy camp project with Julliard, aliens, unlikeable characters, but a few good lines: "I model several permutations of blouses and capris in front of the mirror before settling on a floral sundress." I must save that for a future first-person project with a more sympathetic narrator and an, um, plot.Miri Williamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-13282306172581435092014-08-05T13:35:16.802-05:002014-08-05T13:35:16.802-05:00:D Thanks!:D Thanks!Emilynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-37883242646775056432014-08-05T13:25:16.816-05:002014-08-05T13:25:16.816-05:00Just for fun (and maybe because I'm procrastin...Just for fun (and maybe because I'm procrastinating a tiny bit) I found this one in my day's edits: "He leans to hand me a fresh handkerchief from his pocket and then settles into his wingback chair to smoke." I like the specification of the wingback chair versus my original "large chair." Stephanie Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-33473485004957142922014-08-05T13:17:31.951-05:002014-08-05T13:17:31.951-05:00Oh, I like that sentence so much, Emily! Nice work...Oh, I like that sentence so much, Emily! Nice work!Stephanie Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13128389560727867719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4024721400572472213.post-81658746638448969782014-08-05T12:07:32.506-05:002014-08-05T12:07:32.506-05:00I'm not sure if this is what you meant, but if...I'm not sure if this is what you meant, but if it is, here it is:<br /><br />If felt like all my wounds had been healed, my worries denied, and all my wrongs righted.<br /><br />The reason I thought this might be what you meant is because I used that rather than adj. like wonderful, scary, and things like that.Emilynoreply@blogger.com