Stephanie writes young adult contemporary novels and is the creator of GoTeenWriters.com. Her novels include The Reinvention of Skylar Hoyt series (Revell) and the soon-to-be-released The Revised Life of Ellie Sweet (Playlist). You can connect with her on Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, and check out samples of her work on her author website.
I'm fascinated by the ways people perceive themselves. Sometimes people have a really good grasp on who they are. They know their strengths and flaws, and they don't mind talking about either.
I also know people who pour tons of energy into building an image they can project, that they seem to buy into as well. Like coworkers I had at my old office, who knew how to appear busy and hard-working, and who even seemed to fool themselves.
And then I know people who, for various reasons, don't see themselves clearly at all. I've had friends who will tell me they're horrible at entertaining when they regularly throw the best parties. Or like my sister-in-law who tells me she's horrible with kids...then spends an hour playing hide-and-seek with my children, who completely adore her.
What about your characters? How would they describe his or herself in one word or phrase? Do they see themselves clearly or no?
My new book, The Revised Life of Ellie Sweet, releases in one week. (You can get a little preview and read the first chapter on my website.) Here are a few words and phrases my characters would use to describe who they are at the start of the story:
Ellie: InvisibleOver the course of a story, your characters' word or phrase should be put to the test. Like in The Revised Life of Ellie Sweet, Ellie will have times where she'll feel invisible, times when she wishes she were invisible, times when she has to admit she's not invisible, etc.
Palmer: In control.
Chase: Bad news.
Lucy: The life of the party.
Bianca: Second best.
Karen: Aimless
With a villain or antagonist, sometimes that descriptor doesn't get revealed until the end, when they let it slip and the reader gets a great moment of clarity and understanding.
Try picking a handful of your characters and listing how they would describe who they are. If you feel like it, share your list below!
Here's my three main characters. It's harder than it looks.
ReplyDeleteBeth: passionate
Anna: life-saver
George: analytic
Love this!
ReplyDeleteMilo: Puppet
Micah: Never makes mistakes
Indie: Useless
Atticus: Indestructible
My king's name is Atticus. ;)
DeleteJust wanted to say your characters have really cool names. :)
DeleteAtticus? Just like from to kill a mockingbird (reading that book in school)
DeleteI love that name!
Yes! I LOVE the book and, well, I love the name.
DeleteThanks guys! :) That's really encouraging!
This is great!
ReplyDeleteWade: Left behind
Hauk: Unwanted
Glenn: prepared
Malek: keeper
Eric: Sinner
ReplyDeleteLydia: useless
Gideon:failure
Grassa: perfect
Harold: missing Roddy
Love it!
ReplyDeleteKeyden: Worried
Jemma: Trying
Marrin: Confident
Jammeand: Tough Guy
Thanks Stephanie for another thought provoking post!
~Sarah Faulkner
www.inklinedwriters.blogspot.com
Jessica: Barricaded
ReplyDeleteElena: culture pleasing
Jake: Protector
Taylor: self supported
Grace: Anchor
Kaylee: Innocent
Hmmmm. This'll require a bit of thought. I can't figure them out at the moment...I'll try later!
ReplyDeleteHope (MC): A different normal
DeleteMakayla: Left out
Madison: Leader
Jessie: The queen
Those are just a few of the main-ish characters. :)
Oh, and random update: My first draft is nearing done, and I'm soooo excited! I know the final story will be much longer, though, because it feels like there's so much of the middle of the story that's missing. :)
a different normal? that's awesome!
DeleteThanks :D I loved how that came out.
DeleteHmm..
ReplyDeleteLet's see...
Alastair: conflicted
Breindel: unloved
Tinsley: survivor
Simperer: untouchable
Wow! How characters see themselves in one word? This is going to be great.
ReplyDeleteMC: Insufficient
Hanna: Independent
Eric: Looked down on
This is a great way to analyze one's characters! Thanks for posting!
ReplyDeleteHere are a few of my characters (from a three different WIPs):
Peder: easygoing and dependable
Jaron: calm
Safia: doesn't belong
Chess: independent
I'm currently posting a short series featuring Peder and Jaron on my personal blog. If interested, please check it out! Helpful criticism is welcome. =]
http://sarah-plainandaverage.blogspot.com/2013/04/all-in-days-work-part-3.html
What's a "WIP"?
DeleteSorry, I'm new at this!
(I love the characters' names, by the way!)
Nicole, WIP stands for "work in progress." I'm glad you asked :)
DeleteOh...thank you! "Work In Progress"...I'll have to remember that!
DeleteThank you, Ms. Morrill!
What a great post, Stephanie. I love this idea!
ReplyDeleteBirdie: worthless
Amos: failure
Ky: protector
Awesome post! Here are a few characters of mine. :)
ReplyDeleteElric: Not good enough.
Anya: Secretive
Samantha: Broken
Richard: Kind
Megan: Unsure
Alanna: Happy
These come from three different stories. :)
Ha, I have a character named Anya, too! :D
DeleteHey, it's a great name!
DeleteWow, this is kind of hard! I have 1-3 words for each character, and I can't choose!
ReplyDeleteLexi: Independent, Tough Girl, or Know-it-All
Andif: No Humanity, Ruthless, or Crazy
Ash: Sidekick
Suri: Invisible
Krale: Manipulator
Dandin: Misguided or Betrayer
Jayden: Misguided, Giant Secret, or Untrustworthy
Charity: Cheerful
Zang: Responsible
Kyra: Wisdom or Friend
Thanks for the fun post, good exercise for my brain!
Wow, you guys have some awesome character names! :D
ReplyDeleteWas anybody surprised by the word that came to mind? When I came up with Bianca's, I was surprised to discover that she felt like second-best.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised with Tinsley's word. She is slightly off her rocker, and I didn't realize that she saw herself as a survivor. It was fun trying to get into her head!
DeleteAnya: Noble, the hero
ReplyDeleteRonald: Loyal
James: The funny one
Jane: Ditzy, kind
The king (Atticus): Fatherly
Lional: Evil, the murderer
Ooh, what a brilliant idea! I should do this to all my characters in their personality profiles. Now for some random characters from random stories...
ReplyDeleteCactus: Sensitive
Arranae: Optimistic/Hopeful
Saoirse: Fighter
Hugh: Resident Brainiac
Rhaenne: Princess (like, Queen) and Pawn // Manipulated
Sometimes, I also write a paragraph from my characters' POV. I found it helps get to know who they are in their own perspective.
Can I just say, your characters have the best names I've ever seen. For real.
DeleteI really love that Catcus is sensitive. These are really unique names
DeleteOooooh, this was a hard one. I guess my top five would be:
ReplyDeleteMira: Still a child
Alia: Fiery
Corrin: Quiet pain
Teveon: Desperate
Jianna: The white dove
I luv those names:)
DeleteHmmmm...
ReplyDeleteClara: Afraid to disappoint (what automatically comes to mind...what is most accurate, at least for what I'm writing right now. If you want one word, "quiet" or "delicate" or "gentle" would also work)
Samuel: Devoted
Jericho: Warrior
Elliott: Bitter
Ginger: Joyful
Chrissy: Light
Eleni: Confident
Helene: Wild
Florence: Kind
Merelei: Cold
Yay! I got almost all of them into one word! Clara really has to overcome that fear of disappointing people, and it's an internal struggle for a lot of the first book. So it doesn't define her the whole time, which is why I added the other single words below, because she is a very quiet and gentle person.
Very fun exercise! :) <3
Sierra @ Yearning to Read
This is great! My MC was easy because the book (and title) are based on her change, but the others were harder and fun!
ReplyDeleteKate: Freak
Lissa: Lonely (Wow, that's a surprise! Oh, so that's why......)
Michael: Supportive
Savita: insecure
ReplyDeleteAlian: sympathetic
Alteco: bad (not that creative ;-)
Mr. Sendito: generous
Fun :)
ReplyDeleteReuel ... Confident
Eladriel ... Unsure
Ambryna ... Icy
Volum ... Flirt
This is cool!
Hannah, I love your character's names! They sound awesome; like a story I would want to read! (You like Tolkien, don't you... ;) )
DeleteI know I like Tolkien... one of my favorite authors, especially in the fantasy genre:)
DeleteLayla.
Haha same here! Best author EVERRRRRRRR!! (Well, I think so...) Oh, and Layla, I think it's really cool how you're doing a story involving Merlin. My two favorite topics are Middle-Earth and Arthurian legend! :D
DeleteTwo of my favorite topics, too! In my book you get to meet some of the knights and (maybe) King Arthur! Glad you like the idea:)
DeleteLayla.
Haha, answering this months later. . .Tolkien is my favorite author :) Reuel is named after him. I wish Eladriel's name wasn't so close to Galadriel's, but I was not very creative at the time I got her name, so I just did that. . .and now I don't have the heart to change it!
DeleteGo Tolkinites!! One author to rule them all!
DeleteHmmmm... this might take some thinking...
ReplyDeleteNimueh: Twisted (yeah, I guess, since it was someone else who made her "bad")
Merlin: Kind and confused
Orilane:Talented
Elaira:Compassionate
Elroch:Bitter
Morgana:Pure evil
Wow! Some if those were big surprises! Thanks for such a creative and helpful post!
(By the way, can anyone tell what my books about from my main characters?;))
Layla.
Merlin the Wizard? :)
DeleteCorrect. Oh, and for Merlin I meant to put betrayed:/
DeleteLayla.
*thrilled gasp* You're doing something set in Arthurian legend?? Amazinggggg!!! Great idea! :DDDDDD
DeleteYep! Glad you like it:) <3 <3 <3 And I actually no someone who can publish my book. When it's done I'll be sure that you get a copy:)
DeleteLayla.
Yay! I can't wait! I love books..... ;)
DeleteBtw: Love your first chapter! Especially the sentence: 'It seems Chase Cervantes is trying to give me plenty of inspiration.' made me laughing. Can't wait to read the whole book!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Arende!
DeleteHow do you pronounce your name, by the way? Just curious :)
DeleteEhm, how do I have to explain that? 'Aa'(English people pronounce it like the first 'a' in 'amazing', but in Dutch it's more like the 'a'in 'naam' (name) or 'staart'(tail), 'r' is clear I think, although we pronounce it here a bit more like a Scottisch 'r'. 'e' is like the 'e' in 'Loretta' (to pick a name). 'n' and 'd' are clear, I suppose. Last 'e' is like the 'e'in 'the'. So: aa-r-e-n-d-u. Arende.
DeleteI know it's a difficult name, my parents should have given me a more international one...;-) My last name is just 'the White', translated in English.
Does this make any sense?
Thank you! And I think your name is beautiful :)
DeleteCool post!
ReplyDeleteBryce: Enduring
Caleb: Lacking confidence
Pro: Independent
Jeff: Obsessive
Judah: Manipulative
Dom: Weasel
Rich: Uncaring
Reuben: Cruel
That "weasel" one made me laugh, Victoria!
DeleteThis is so cool!! Ok... But also very hard... Hrm...
ReplyDeleteAlyssa: Walking oxymoron
Eric: haunted/guilty
Morgan: bubbly
Jake: rationally irrational
Jeff: self-absorbed
Courtney: shrill
Uncle D: idealistic
Walden: sadistic
Amber: tormented
That was tough; I think I kind of cheated. Believe it or not, by main two (Alyssa and Eric) were the hardest. Kind of like how it's hard to get a clear view of yourself, I guess, because you're too close. You can't see the full picture. I remember someone here (was it you, Alyson?) mentioned how they did a self portrait which they weren't satisfied with because they can see what's not right more than anyone else because they're so close to the project... I don't know how to describe it any better than that, but yeah. It made sense in my head. If I could pick three words for each I'd add "hypocritical" and "smart yet blind" to Alyssa, and "caring" and "self-doubting" to Eric.
Yeah, I think it was Alyson who said that. Makes perfect sense.
DeleteAlyssa is a walking oxymoron? I like that! (It made me smile) :D Keep up the good work!
DeleteUmm....let me see...
ReplyDeleteFinley: Determined
Tallon: Self-inflicted solitude
Zane: Jokester
Anilisa: Compassionate
Gwendolai: Burdened by knowledge
Roxana: Innocent
And in my other WIP...
Risatani: Strong (world-on-your-shoulders strong, not phsyically)
Gaelan: Valiant and selfless
Hesperia: Quiet
Xanthias: Fighting against the darkness
Ok, I kind of cheated. They weren't all one word. But they still fit!
Neither were mine :)
DeleteSounds like a fun idea, here are a few of mine
ReplyDeleteOceana: Mystery
Chandler: Independant
Callum: Loyal
Stephanie: Repressed
Beth: Broken
Great names!!
DeleteColtan - Desperate
ReplyDeleteAcelina - Self-confident
Donnelly - Compassionate
Riha - Believing
Iris - action-taker
Graham - Stronghold
Rashawn - Thoughtless
Maddok - discretely powerful
This is hard! I can think of plenty of phrases, but all the words I think of have "it works but..." moments. Thanks for the challenge!
ReplyDeleteAvery: unfailingly loyal (independent is really the first that comes to mind, except she'd really rather die than leave Oliver, so I think loyal fits well too)
Oliver: optimist
Crow: leader
Adam: brave
Colby: betrayer
Eloise: strong
Awesome!
ReplyDeleteLilli: People pleaser
Viola: Loyal
Gibraltar: Wise
Danrik: Mysterious
Sage: Arrogant
Madrin: Friendly
Dandelion: Innocent
I'm writing a story set in the medieval times. It's really fun writing it :D
Ahh, here it goes!
ReplyDeleteMara:Chosen
Piper:Fiery
Hazel:Strong, yet gentle
Corky:Intelligent
Ryker:Anger mixed with jelousy
Thanks for the post!
<3,
Eden
coffeeandbeautifulmesses.blogspot.com
Rose: driven
ReplyDeleteAshley: the conscience
Nameless: lost
Archer: guilty
Monday: relentless and triumphant
Max: alone
(Rose and Ashley are two personalities inside the Nameless girl's mind, which is why she feels lost)
Neat idea. I had fun figuring my characters out. It helps that I was just explaining them to my brother. ;)
ReplyDeleteHeather: Cautious
Bryce: Protective
Rayford: Devoted
Reed: Patriotic
Miss Lucinda: Confidant
Thanks for the post! This was so much fun!
ReplyDeleteZach- misfit
Junie- open
Tripp- cool
Gryphon- misunderstood
Leslie- outgoing
Nina- innocent
That's so cool! I never thought of doing that . . . hmmmm.
ReplyDeleteFire: Dangerous
Xander: Thoughtful
Petrov: Full of vengeance
Graven: Confidant
Adrik: cocky
Thanks so much for the post! I love posts that really make me think!
Corinne: Untalented
ReplyDeleteLaura: Grateful
Jack: Anxious
By the way, your first chapter is really great! I can't wait until the book releases.
Thank you!
DeleteOkay... This is a LOT harder than it sounds...
ReplyDeletePurcy: Lost and Alone (okay I know it's more than one word but...)
Felone:In charge
Caturah: A Monster
Meow-Chen: Laid back
Okay I wan to try this with some of my other characters
Khora: Average
Rhyan: Overprotective
Erim: Distant
Casticor: A Ruler or King
Okay this is REALLY FUN... I could go on forever but I won't
Ooh, I never would've thought this is so hard, especially that the Polish names are confusing me when trying to write English words. Anyway, here it goes:
ReplyDeleteFryderyk: mom's little boy
Dawid: brave coward
Kazimiera: confusing
Boleslaw: lovestruck
Katarzyna: scheming
Ewa: always around
~Ally
Hmmmmm, lets see....
ReplyDeleteTess: Curious
Archer: Secretive
Jasmine: eager
Alanna: Beautiful
Rani: (in)Dependent
ReplyDeleteAmity: Courageous
Hardy: Humble
~HGJ
Spenser: broken
ReplyDeleteLevi: healing
Father: Atoning
Lanie: falling
Juan: Oblivious
Kristina: Trapped
Er... some of these are verbs. XD
Spade: sheltered
ReplyDeleteStratus: rebellious
Judah: divinity
Tide: shallow
Till: blinded
Ember: empathetic
Sawyer: badass
Eyas: vengeful
Daisy: pure
from my latest finished dystopian novel, The Towers. Waiting to hear back from the publishers as we speak!
Love this. Don't have all my characters yet, but for the ones I do have.
ReplyDeleteFMC Allie: Insecure but kind and gentle. Sorry, she just couldn't be one word. She kept pulling at my brain, telling me she was not just insecure.
MMC Jay: Loyal
Matchitehew: Confused
Eris: Evil
Abduxel: Pure Evil
Abner: Strong, both ways.
Chandur: Gentle, he's a dragon. Don't know if he counts. : /
I only made up the name Chandur, by the way.
So I was kinda bad at this, but I tried:
ReplyDeleteArnia: Devoted
Peregrine: Afraid
Willem: Trying to forget (couldn't think of one word that means that)
Faro: Clown
Arvid: Many-sided
Minka: Under the radar
Faylinn: Fierce
Hethra: Power-hungry
Not yet named bad guy: Ambitious
I feel like Arnia is really understated with this word, though. But even so I feel like I know so much more about my characters from one little word, almost as if I know their true names. Arvid and Minka were hard because they are based off my to best friends in real life and I will not pretend I know enough by half to say their true, one-word essences.
Thanks for a great post! I tried your technique on my characters:
ReplyDeleteLuke: reckless
Scarlett: honest
Cobra: stubborn
Saunders: wise
Ophelia: manipulative
Roxanne: calculating
Randall: stoic
Aria: loyal
Valko: enigmatic
I actually found that summing up my protagonist (Luke) in one word was really easy, but the supporting characters were much harder! I probably need to do more characterisation :P
Ooohh, I want to try!
ReplyDeleteSiena: Adventurer
Jamie: Protector
Desmond: Naiive/curious
Bryce: Caring
Emmeline: Loving
I have a sienna! (but with two 'n's)
DeleteOh let's see....
ReplyDeleteJames: Ashamed
Jason: Unsure
Roger: Evil
Sonya: Hurt
Isabella: A handful
ReplyDeleteAlice: Optimistic
Grace: Determined/won't change her opinions(stubborn?)
I know this is old, but I absolutely love this website. You have no idea how much it's been helping me in creating and developing my story. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteElise: creative
Shay: protective
Petra: emotional
Anya: rogue
Thank you! This is extremely helpful!
ReplyDeleteIvy: stuck
Ignis: damaged
Caius: logical
Marina: experienced/scared
Peter: torn
Anastasia: adventurous/committed
This has helped me get to know my characters a lot! Thank you! (some of these are technically phrases, but it works)
ReplyDeleteSienna: Seize the day!
Ayla: quiet & shy
Zora: Cheesy adventurer
Audra: unique
Caleb: beat down and belittled
And in another story:
Emberly: "different"
Sarvi: calm and reasonable
Trith: carried away
Beatrix: Adventurous; unacknowledged.
ReplyDeleteNathaniel: All my fault!
Abigale: Sun's always rising.